The vast majority of the edits for Fatehaven were not scripting errors or pronoun mistakes. They weren’t second-person perspective missteps either, though I did grow tired of writing “You”! No, they were problems with present tense. Specifically, I naturally wrote in the past. It was a tendency that was hard to avoid even 100k words into the tale. The Wheel of Time, A Game of Thrones, Harry Potter—the books I’ve read and have been...
Posts made in January, 2015